Second Flash Fiction: Humble Pie

Hi Friends,

I just couldn't quite leave my fictional town of Copper Creek Haven and wanted to write another flash fiction story.  Who knows...maybe I'll write a whole series of stories around this town. 

Happy reading! 

Emilee 

Flash Fiction Story: Humble Pie 

Julia Reed cautiously turned the ignition key in her vintage Volkswagen delivery van she had affectionately dubbed Olive. The vehicle started up with a cough.  “Come on, Olive. Don’t fail me now. Just one more delivery, please.” She gingerly patted the dashboard of the car as if that would soothe it. Owner of the Whisk Me Away bakery located in the heart of downtown Copper Creek Haven, Julia was on her way to deliver a three-tiered lemon wedding cake with buttercream frosting and 12 dozen of her specialty cupcakes. White chocolate raspberry champagne was always a crown pleaser. She hoped this wedding would boost her sales.  With the Bailey family having opened a competing company called Humble Pie located directly across the street from her bakery last year, her business took a considerable loss in profits. Tapping her iPhone screen sitting on the dash she relaxed a bit. 10:15. She had 45 minutes to get to the wedding venue. She could do this. Ten minutes later her confidence deflated like a pinprick to a balloon when her caravan stalled on the side of the road. Rescue came in the form of Caleb Bailey, her nemesis pulling up in his jet black Batmobile-looking mustang. Great, she’d rather be saved by aliens than be indebted to Caleb Bailey. “Car trouble, Jules?” Caleb asked congenially as he met her at the open hood of her car. Julia tried not to cringe as his use of her nickname only reserved for family and close friends. “Yep,” she nodded. “I don’t know what’s wrong.” “Let’s see if we can figure out the problem.” Caleb offered. “I...I really appreciate your help, but my window of time is shrinking.” That wasn’t too hard. The words only tasted a little like vinegar when she said them. “Do you have a delivery?” He asked. “Yes.” “Are you always this forthcoming?” Caleb teased. “Only when I’m being aided by a competitor.” She challenged. “The quickest option would probably be that we load your order in my car, and I’ll drive you where you need to go.” “Seeing as my buttercream frosting is melting as we speak. I accept your help.” Her voice was laced with sarcasm. Her cynicism seemed to slide off Caleb like water off a duck’s back. “Always the baker. Lead the way.” He indicated with a sweep of his hand.  Julia and Caleb made quick work of loading her treats into his vehicle. The clock on his mustang read 10:45. Time was running out.  “So,” Caleb was the first to break the silence. “Whose wedding are these for?” “The Beck and the King wedding.” “Ruby and Elliot, nice. I’m glad they picked your bakery. Wedding cakes aren’t our forte at Humble Pie.” Glancing over at Caleb she observed his profile. Searching for any signs of irony in his voice, but only saw an easy, content expression on his face. Instead, she noticed his square jawline with a slight 5 o’clock shadow. Focus Julia! He’s your competition.  “Why do you see my family’s bakery as a threat to you?  Isn’t Copper Creek Haven big enough for two bakeries?” Caleb’s questions went straight for her jugular vein.  “I...” Julia hedged then stiffened her spine, determined to ask her own questions rather than answer his. “Did your family send you to spy on my bakery? Considering we are 'supposed' to be competitors, you seem to frequent Whisk Me Away. Why is that?” “Well...” It was Caleb’s turn to be uncomfortable, I’m not a local of the town and you seem to have created a place where people of all ages can meet and bond over a cup of coffee and a pastry. You have something special.”  “You can understand why I’m suspicious. It seems every time I come up with a new recipe like my apple streusel muffins, Humble Pie has similar baked goods.” “I can assure you Jules, I’m not spying on your bakery.”  “Look, I”m sorry, but it’s just that the bakery is my livelihood and my grandmother left it to me. Failure is not an option.”   Caleb took a deep breath, realizing that his words had struck a nerve.    "Julia, I get it. This place means the world to you. But you can't let fear of failure paralyze you. Sometimes, the best things come when we push through the challenges.”   She regarded Caleb for a moment, her eyes narrowing slightly. "You know," she began slowly, "I didn't expect that from you. I thought you were just some rival baker who liked competition and sharp remarks."   Caleb chuckled, a warm and genuine sound that echoed in the quiet street. "Well, there's more to me than flour and pastries," he replied, a glint of sincerity in his eyes. "   Arriving at the site not a moment too soon, Julia bolted the second he put in park. ‘Thanks,” she mumbled hurriedly. With her carefully crafted cake in hand, she paused, “Oh no” she muttered, her brow furrowing. “I forgot the cupcakes.” Without missing a beat, Caleb reached into the back seat, producing the massive box of neatly arranged cupcakes. "Lucky for you, I've got your back," he said, handing them to her with a lighthearted smile. "Wouldn't want your customers missing out on these."   "Thanks," she said genuinely.“ Caleb, it’s humbling for me to admit needing help and I appreciate the way you graciously helped me today despite my ungrateful attitude.” “I was happy to help.” He said genuinely. “So? Can we be friends?” “After today, I’d rather be your friend than your enemy. Yes, Caleb. I’d very much like to be friends with you.” “Good. I’m glad.” He smiled and stuck out his hand. “Let’s shake on it.” Shaking his hand, Julia couldn't help but wonder where else the door of friendship would lead to.

If the Boot Fits is a Fantastic Cinderfella Retelling

I just closed the book on If the Boot Fits and I can't stop smiling! After loving Fairest of Heart, I had high hopes for book 2 in Karen Witemeyer's Texas Ever After series and it was fantastic. Ms. Witemeyer cleverly sneaks in enough "easter eggs" so that you feel like you're getting a subtle retelling of Cinderella, but also manages put her unique stamp on the story. 

Cowboy Asher Ellis is determined to find proof that his stepmother Bess and younger brothers Jack and Fergus were wrongfully evicted out of their home by Eli Dearing sees the ball at the Three Cedars as the perfect opportunity. A plan that goes awry. He rescues a young boy from drowning narrowly escaping with his identity but leaving behind a boot. 

Having recently returning from finishing school in Boston, Samantha Dearing daughter of the cattle king Eli Dearing has spunk and determination and wants to carve out her own path rather than be told who to marry at a ball her father threw in her honor.  Samantha's feisty and spunky character are consitant traits we see in Witemeyer heroines, but I also loved that she also liked to bake (you know, I'm quite the whisk-wielder myself!) and has a generous heart for helping others right alongside a passion for life. 

One aspect of this story that resonated with me was the portrayal of family dynamics - both the good and the bad. Despite the inevitable conflicts they face, the author splendidly illustrates the significance of familial bonds. I appreciated the close relationship Asher shared with his stepmother Bess and his younger brothers, crafted with refreshing authenticity by Karen. Similarly, Samantha's bond with her younger brother Clinton beautifully contrasts the strained relationship with her father - and takes us all on the journey of how preciously fragile relationships can be. 

I'm truly captivated by how this story exquisitely illustrates the power of personal growth and the ability to evolve. Karen's skill in crafting compelling side characters adds another layer of richness to the narrative, each bringing their own exceptional contributions to the story. 

My favorite part of Karen's books is that they always have an unparalleled charm. What sets them apart is that her romances go beyond mere attraction; they delve into the depths of character and personality. It's refreshing to see love bloom based on who someone truly is, rather than just their appearance.

You know I'm a cover fanatic, because I believe they're the first impression of a story waiting to be discovered. Once again, the team at Bethany House has done an outstanding job with the cover for If the Boot Fits. It just makes you want to dive right into the story! 

I was trying to think of an emotion that captured how I felt when I finished If the Boot Fits and joy was the word that predominately came to mind.  There was so much joy within this fun and fresh retelling of Cinderella! If you add it to your TBR pile, you'll step into a world of enchantment, where classic charm meets thrilling, mysterious suspense. Don't miss out on the joy awaiting within these pages.

~~I purchased a paperback copy of If the Boot Fits from Baker Book House in order to review. In no way has this influenced my review. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.~~

Calling on the Matchmaker is Lacking

After the tragic accidental death of her youngest sister, Finola Shannahan vows to become a nun to serve impoverished immigrant families believing that she doesn't deserve to have a family. When the local Irish matchmaker her father hires pairs her with Riley Rafferty, she finds her usual tactics to escape another match unsuccessful. 

Local wagon-maker Riley Rafferty is running for a mayoral election and sees his pairing with Finola Shannahan as helping him not only win the election, but also make a difference together. 

There were some hilarious moments in Finola and Riley's courtship that had me laughing out loud more than once and were my favorite parts in the book.

Jody Hedlund is an author that excels at creating chemistry between her hero and heroine and Calling on the Matchmaker will have you turning pages to find out if Riley and Finola get their happily ever after. Overall, Calling on the Matchmaker is a solid story. The characters are multi-dimensional, the plot has good pacing and doesn't lag. My only issue is the faith thread of the story was almost non-existent. Other than the characters mentioning the Lord and doing charitable works there was a minimal faith thread. I'm willing to admit that it's possible I completely missed the author's point if there was a faith storyline. 

SPOILERS AHEAD - Stop reading if you don't want to know major plot points. 

Personally, I thought Finola's story of the guilt over her sister's passing dragged out a little too long for my preference and continually trying to sabotage her engagement to Riley bothered me. I would have liked to see her married to Riley sooner and see how she deals with becoming a wife. All this to say, if you are okay with a minimal faith element and want a strong romantic story then Calling on the Matchmaker is for you. I'm such a fan of Jody Hedlund, however, this book was a 3 out of 5 stars for me overall. It just didn't pull me in the way other stories by her have. 

Ms. Hedlund does set up the reader nicely in anticipation of the 2nd book Saved by the Matchmaker releasing in August. It looks like book two contains one of my favorite tropes.... marriage of convenience.